How do you feel about the story?
Added 2025-03-28 05:00:08 +0000 UTCHey y'all, I've been reading through some forums about the game, and a common complaint I keep seeing is that it doesn't have much of a story. I realize that the way I'm writing it might make it seem that way, but I know that the vocal minority often voices their opinions the loudest. I also understand that there are many aspects of the game that I contribute to, but writing is the area where I feel most confident. I just wanted to know if I’ve actually been doing a bad job with the story or if it's just a matter of perspective.
P.S. Working on chapter 13 rather than Day Two of Our Frozen Hearts. I hope you understand, and I’m really sorry if this is disappointing. With how I’m feeling right now, I don’t think I’ll be able to finish it anytime soon, thanks for the understanding!
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oh thank you for the written feedback! I'm gonna have to work on that then, I'm gonna make more effort to show it in the upcoming chapter, do you have anything else to mention? :)
Trriggered Bakery
2025-03-28 17:08:39 +0000 UTCIt feels like a series of small stories, like, sometimes when I'm playing I get a reference or a mention of another character, but each chapter feels like a bunch of short stories all taking place in the same world. This is just my opinion of course.
LochMess
2025-03-28 17:06:48 +0000 UTC
