COMMISSION: "OWitH - Day 1" (Continued)
Added 2021-10-30 06:00:03 +0000 UTCSpanking-obsessed Michelle Yen's holodeck program is finally finished. Now, anytime she feels like being disciplined by "Governess" Deanna Troi, she needs only to enter this 20th century world where she's under the care of the strict widow Janet Winters. But when the computer relays malfunction, Michelle realizes that her fantasy is about to turn into a VERY long day...
This is the second part of "One Week in the Holodeck," a commissioned Star Trek Fanfiction that continues to be really fun to write! Check out the post on 9/25 to see part 1. More to come soon!
This game is a commission from a patron! If you’d like to commission your very own text adventure, message me here or at waferborn@gmail.com!
Comments
One minor error - Dinner in the Winters household is a chilly affair. Guinan skips the meal, claiming that her travels have made her more hungry than tired. It should be more tired than hungry.
Alan Loboschefski
2021-10-30 22:25:08 +0000 UTC$20 for each 1000 words, telling me your story idea is always free! You can message me here or at my email :) Thank you, I’ve had fun writing it, and there more to come!
WaferBorn
2021-10-30 19:12:00 +0000 UTCHow much does a commission cost? Also great story so far.
SinsofSorrow
2021-10-30 10:26:31 +0000 UTCOh, this is GREAT. Props to both your writing and the commissioner because a monthly (so far), serialized story like this is perfect. Genuinely intrigued to see where it goes next.
Dirk Lazarus
2021-10-30 07:33:39 +0000 UTC
