COMMISSION: Caught! (Domestic Discipline Text Adventure)
Added 2022-02-25 06:35:30 +0000 UTCSomewhere around the latter half of the 20th century, certain types of domestic discipline went out of style in your neighborhood. Specifically, spanking...but in just a few households, the change never took place at all.
Lucky you - your house is one of them!
Even though you’re 18-years-old and heading to college on a sports scholarship in just 6 months, your mom still spanks you when you misbehave. It’s ridiculous! You have tried to tell her this – it has not gone well for you. At this point, you mostly just go with it. You make sure nobody at school knows the secret: you’ve had to go to some pretty serious lengths (the secret is ice -- LOTS of ice) to make sure no one catches on. You try your best to behave.
And, when you don’t -- because what 18-year-old is always behaved? -- when you don't, well...
You try your best not to get caught.
Thank you to the kind patron who commissioned this awesome game! If you’d like to commission your very own text adventure, message me here or at waferborn@gmail.com!
EDIT: Fixed the bug Dirk mentioned where cheating on homework resulted in a dead end.
Comments
Great story! Noticing that it seems like you get the same outcome whether you choose to clean your room or not.
B Daniel
2022-03-03 03:14:57 +0000 UTCVery short but I really enjoyed it and hoping for further content. Choice-based text games have always been one of my favorites :D
StateFarmmmmmmmm
2022-02-27 00:41:27 +0000 UTCFixed it!
WaferBorn
2022-02-26 09:00:24 +0000 UTCShoot - Thanks for the heads up! I'll reupload when it's fixed. The problem there is that the game isn't fully done -- there will be a consequence for cheating later down the line but not yet
WaferBorn
2022-02-25 15:24:02 +0000 UTCVery fun so far (the line about how your old PC seems to be able to run Waferborn text adventures got a chuckle and Mom's ongoing "This hurts me more than it hurts you joke" is adorably annoying and makes me want to see her learn the hard way how untrue that is, haha). The "Cheat" option doesn't work and if you go home after taking the forged homework it doesn't give you any options to continue the scene, just FYI :)
Dirk Lazarus
2022-02-25 14:14:28 +0000 UTC
