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BITTER RIVALS PART 3: "The Final Chapter" (GOOD ENDING)

The rain has cleared and the morning sun is shining on a damp world when the doorbell sounds with a low-sounding bzzzz. You and Deidre exchange a glance: your "maid" is currently dusting the cupboard with one hand (having finished setting out a breakfast platter) and trying to subtly rub her heinie with the other as her skirt hikes up further on her reddened rear each time she reaches.

Deirdre's eyes go wide, and she mouths to you as though your rival was just out of earshot:

Where are my clothes?!...

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This story of Deirdre, Emily, and the rivalry is one of my favorite ever. I intend to put all the parts of this amazing commission together into a single game over the next couple of months. Thank you SO MUCH to this commissioner! If you'd like to commission your own idea, email me at waferborn@gmail.com.

In case you don't remember, the Bitter Rivals series, all of these games are available for my patrons:  

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BITTER RIVALS Part 1
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BITTER RIVALS Part 2: Rival-Sitting
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BITTER RIVALS 3: The Final Chapter (BAD ENDING)

Enjoy, and STAY TUNED!

BITTER RIVALS PART 3: "The Final Chapter" (GOOD ENDING)

Comments

Wonderful ending, the only thing I would change is to give the option to reaffirm dominance with your rival instead of letting her get even ♥

Verzerren

Love it so far, though. Deirdre getting her comeuppance is maybe the most satisfying punishment you've ever written. Karma is often the key to a great spanking story, I feel.

Dirk Lazarus

Getting the same issue as above. The suspense to see your rival get their revenge is killing me!

Dirk Lazarus

Lot of fun but I couldn't finish it. I got to the 3rd maintenance spanking and choose not to make her strike out. It then played did the opposite dialog as if I did make her strike out. Then when my rival came into the room and Emily explained that she was going to give the punishment spanking the next continue went back and played it out as if I didn't make her fail. That continued until the rival entered the room then the whole thing would repeat just looping between those two paths. I'm playing on mobile if that helps.

Soot

are you going to make a version where it can go either good ending or bad depending on choice and starting from chapter 1 to the end?

Talon Boice


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