BARE-BOTTOM B-LISTERS (Spanking Text Adventure!)
Added 2024-03-11 04:36:32 +0000 UTC"Were you the one looking in through the window before?"
Alicia's thoughts suddenly flash back to the scene -- the slap of her mother's palm on Del's bare, rippling butt cheeks, its hard rhythm like a slow clap as Del whined and pleaded -- and then her mind goes blank. Did Del see me? From her...erm...position over her mother's lap, she couldn't have...but then Alicia remembers Del's mom glancing up, their eyes meeting for just a split second. Did Del's mom tell her someone was at the door? She opens her mouth, but nothing comes out.
What will Alicia say next? YOU get to decide!
Woo! I know I said I'd release it "this week" but I was secretly hoping I'd finish in time to post it tonight -- and I did!!
Okay, so here's how it will work: CHAPTER 3 is a text adventure with 3 different endings! Which one do you like best?!
Let me know your favorite in the comments OR in my private messages -- you can even email your thoughts to waferborn@gmail.com!
The ending with the most "votes" (comments, messages, and likes) will become the one I use in the novel...and Bare Bottom B-Listers will continue from there!
I'm REALLY excited about this, because like I said, I love getting feedback!! Let me know what you think, and STAY TUNED!
Comments
Each of the endings are great, but I always have a bias towards giving the spanking in these.
Verzerren
2024-03-31 22:23:40 +0000 UTChey i need help in wtp
Timchar14 uzamaki
2024-03-19 02:34:51 +0000 UTCI was envisioning yes — maybe 2010s
WaferBorn
2024-03-12 03:43:18 +0000 UTCYooooo. These ideas RULE. I love the idea that Alicia and Del get authority to spank each other, definitely going to have that happen at some point. The Red Bun Circle is too freaking great lmao
WaferBorn
2024-03-12 03:42:49 +0000 UTCWe got a good array of options man. I really do like the ending where Alicia spanks Del, mainly because of what Del says at the end hints that she doesnt mind Alicia spanking her which is fun. But honestly, the ending where both Alicia and Del get spanked is the best. That line where they are like "two misbehaving sisters" sold the premise for me. But I would like to suggest for ending 3, that both Alicia and Del get the "authority" to spank the other for whatever occasion lol Also, another fun idea I had was that in Hollywood, actors on the set of movies tend to form little social groups/cliques for the movie they are involved in. What if both Alicia and Del end up doing this with some the other women in the movie, but with the caveat that any joining member must get a bare-bottom spanking to join. They could call it something Red Bun Circle.
Master Blaster Synphone Tasker
2024-03-12 02:44:32 +0000 UTCDies it take place and modern day?
Timchar14 uzamaki
2024-03-12 02:22:16 +0000 UTCHere's the other idea I have for a production spanking. This one's less realistic though. There's a spanking scene in the movie for one of the main characters, but their contract explicitly forbids stunt work. However, either Del or Alicia share a striking resemblance to the actress from the waist down. Their incredibly embarrassed by the prospect but having a stunt credit is great to have on a portfolio so they agree. It's supposed to be a rather quick shot before cutting to the lead, but since the director is a perfectionist the shoot drags on... and on... and on...
Soot
2024-03-11 07:26:02 +0000 UTCThis might also be a good point to start sowing seeds of other characters finding out about the spankings as maybe there's not time to make it back to the trailer so they just find somewhere secluded. It won't get witnessed, but maybe a certain Chad overhears something. Only if you want to chase that thread idea.
Soot
2024-03-11 07:22:15 +0000 UTCI got two ideas for spankings that have to do with the production but they kind of depend on how grounded you want the set to be. I'm actually really impressed with how you wrote that, I've done extra work before and that really is the feel of a lower budget set. Anyways one idea for a more grounded idea I have is the popular girls need to be crying for a scene. Something like prom got canceled or main popular girl rival got humiliated or another pre teen movie cliché. Problem is Popular Girl #4 can't cry on command and the director is adamantly against using eyedrops or just running mascara. He wants real tears to sell it. So Alicia asks Del if she can you know... help her out. So they go off in private to spank her to tears before their called back to set.
Soot
2024-03-11 07:20:46 +0000 UTCIt's hard to pick, because Alicia spanking Del is such a fun scene, but I gotta vote for Del's mom spanking both girls. I think it works better to build their friendship. I also prefer Alicia telling the truth about seeing the first spanking
Soot
2024-03-11 07:10:38 +0000 UTC
