Idk why but just this already took me forever. Good news is, it's almost done now. Those 13 pages were divided into 3 parts at first but the whole thing took a turn and now I think it's good, that they ended up as one part. (or maybe this is my excuse for taking 3 months :D)
The 'plot' also took a last minute turn. Tbh I'm not quite sure were it will go. This is basically a short pitch for a concept I have.
It's funny you can see exactly where I had off days XD I'll fix it the best I can when I do the fine tuning at the end. ;)
I hope this tickles your interest in what's going on. I didn't want to reveal the dialouge just yet ;) but I hope this tickles your interest in what's going on.