Remember this? This is about as far as I got the last time I touched it, I reworked the second page (the first image here), and put together the third. It's not B) super exciting B) at all B);;; but here's somethin'.
edit: Oh I can explain why I reworked page 2! I wanted to fit a full body/medium-distance shot because the original felt like there was just Too Many Close Up Shots and it felt really even throughout. So we're shaking it up for a little more variety :'3 lots of things to keep track of when trying to do comic layouts I am... not good at it >:')