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Comic page 12 sketchy storyboard sketch xdd

Added 2023-01-04 23:13:39 +0000 UTC

Hey, if you are reading this, then you might be able to help me!

i've been wanting to continue with the comic, but as i said on a post b4, i'm actually stuck

what you are seeing is the storyboard i made like 2 years ago.
I've been changing stuff from the SB since the 3-4 page, and i have managed to make it work, till now

from this sketch, all i want to keep is the POV t1tjob with the cxmshot
and maaaaaaybe the sideview, but not as the first pannel

i want to change the text, and well, add more pannels on the top/middle to reach that explosion point
(and if you are wondering what's on the next page, is a splash page of seraphine with a facial xd)

so, have any ideas?
or an interesting refference that i can use for the pannels?, remember that this akali part is only she using sera's bewbs

you can comment that here or in my discord!
if we manage to create something good, i'll continue with the comic :3