Just got this from Wondollar. My notes:
Looks great. My only note would be in panel 4. Now that I see how the dialogues come out, I think itโd be best to split Albertโs second balloon in two:
ALBERT
I donโt wanna be wooโ
ALBERT (explosive)
BOOBS! I HAVE BOOBS!
That's it. Looking forward to seeing it. :)
--Jaycee
Jaycee Knight
2020-03-30 00:53:50 +0000 UTCJakal
2020-03-29 21:11:26 +0000 UTCChoppy
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