Just got this from Wondollar.
My feedback:
I think panel 4 could use a bit of audio, so I'm suggesting the following:
In panel 5 the sheep cloud could be a bit bigger and maybe a bit less defined or wispier.
Jaycee Knight
2020-09-21 21:34:44 +0000 UTCJaycee Knight
2020-09-21 21:34:05 +0000 UTCElizabeth Anne Black
2020-09-21 21:13:13 +0000 UTCMashugana
2020-09-21 15:23:07 +0000 UTC