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Coffee Scales - Bonus Pic Feedback Poll

I want your feedback!  Hearing back from readers is how I know what works, what could work even better, and what you want more of in the future. So let me know what you thought about story/art/etc, what you liked, what you want more of, what you thought could be better, etc!

If you leave a COMMENT WITH FEEDBACK below, you can also VOTE  WHICH BONUS PIC FOR THIS STORY YOU WANT TO SEE. 

Votes without feedback won't be counted! 🤷

A: Daija (Human) pinching Manoa
B: Daija (Snake) squeezing Manoa
C: Bast snoozing on a defeated Daija
D: Bast snoozing on Manoa 

And as always, thanks again for reading. 

Comments

I thought the story was good but a little short. I would like to see Manoa stay fatter at least for a couple issues.

JC

Don’t forget to leave feedback on the issue to complete your vote!

Rampant404

D

Viewtiful Roy

D

Yungsta904

With each story the world you've made expands and your art improves. I'm curious to see if other gods join in the mischief.

Yungsta904

I can certainly see the appeal on both counts 😆 Don’t forget to sound off on which bonus pic you want!

Rampant404

To be honest I just wanted Manoa to get fatter, that's all I cared about. Well that and seeing Bast again.

MastersJoyUniverse

Thank you for the feedback! I really would like to do some more wholesome fun for Manoa (to help balance out the extra-nutty stuff, ha). Her cat has been underutilized and I hope to change that, plus maybe do another “girls’ night” kind of story. Oh, and don’t forget to comment which feedback pic you want!

Rampant404

I really do like this on a lot but I love your comics for a long time so i like the vore tease a lot like to have a little more but like it all the same like to see more stores like this maybe with manoa friends and manoa cat is very cute and was very wholesome

mustoid

No no, these are fair comments and I appreciate it friend. 🙂 My commissioner who’s responsible for the “What If?” comics actually made some overtures about doing a mini-alternate ending comic of Daijah getting what she wants, so if that comes together you’ll see it here!

Rampant404

Um I really liked the art in I got really excited for some vore, but it all feels like a big tease now. It would have been nice if there was a shot of her inside Daija’s (cool name by the way) mouth or something not full vore or maybe even a dream sequence. The story was great and the scenes with manoa growing were sexy. I just wish there was a little bit more. ( sorry if I sound negative I liked the comic.) choice B

Choky Feddy

oh and choice D

alexandre

great story, would like more story with villains, art is good, helps that there is no need to draw much nipples.

alexandre


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