Magical Rubber Maiden Julia #4
Added 2018-05-05 01:13:29 +0000 UTCTrust me, I'm going somewhere with this ;)
Sorry for the delay again everyone, I really hope y'all enjoy this one!
I've included the B&W version, the Untexted version, and a few design sketches for the dark armour~
Thanks again everyone, I have really great, really supportive readers!
Now I'm going to have a cup of coffee and flop out for the night!
Comments
You will know VERY soon ;)
Fiona
2018-05-30 08:09:55 +0000 UTCOooo so is Aesthiria hero or villain, cause I am leaning towards villain and I am REALLY hoping she wins.
Azure
2018-05-28 21:05:28 +0000 UTCWell done
mykalwane spirt of gender shrug they greater than she, she greater than he.
2018-05-11 07:46:10 +0000 UTCGlad you're enjoying it! I always like hearing your speculations :) The wording was intentional, and I actually removed the 'to' from it, because it sounded more like how I imagined she'd speak. More direct, more kind of ye oldey.
Fiona
2018-05-08 03:24:10 +0000 UTCOh wow, I wasn't expecting Julia to end up looking like she does here, but it is a good look for a henchwoman working for Empress Aesthiria that's a major step up from the standard faceless doll minions which could be employed as foot soldiers (and it's also nice to finally know our mystery woman's name)! And it does seem like Julia is totally under Aesthiria's control here (at least for the moment), but I am very curious to see how exactly things will develop from here... There's one slight tweak needed though, that alright? In panel five, to make it flow a little better than it currently does, maybe try saying this: "I had intended you TO merely BE the first of my new empire of dolls. But no... This sheer power cannot be wasted. Instead, you shall serve me in a far greater capacity", since the current phrasing there is a little bit odd looking to me personally.
DarkJade
2018-05-06 14:36:11 +0000 UTCNot quite what I was expecting her outfit to be like, but I'm still interested in seeing where this is going.
Stefan J Neylon
2018-05-05 15:26:29 +0000 UTCOh yes very yummy and ssuch a cute look for both chaars!
Melina Swiftwind
2018-05-05 09:15:20 +0000 UTCLike the design for the elite minion design. Looking forward to the empire building and Julia's first appearance.
Mindwave
2018-05-05 07:15:47 +0000 UTC
