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Collar(ed)6 II - #02

So being real: I hate this strip. I hate everything from the line art to the colours. I tried to do something different with the colours in hopes of compensating for the shitty line art and just made it worse. I'm terribly sorry for how this one came out. I would've trashed it and started over but it's been too long since my last proper update so I decided to bite my tongue and post. Mrgh.

Not quite sure what my next update is gonna be. Still sorting out the details of the C6 reboot, so I'm likely gonna do another page of Collar d6 (the tabletop game one) if that's alright with y'all. Lookin' forward to y'alls feedback on this and anything else y'all care to talk about. With the reboot coming up I'm sure y'all have a lot of thoughts and possibly questions for me so I'm happy to read and answer anything I can! As always, thank you so much for the love and support everyone. I couldn't ask for a better audience! Love y'all!

Collar(ed)6 II - #02 Collar(ed)6 II - #02

Comments

You did **VERY GOOD** on this.

KF5TQN

I actually REALLY like the comic and how cool it looks, with Michelle still struggling to get used to the whole idea of acting as a submissive in a semi-public setting, even if no-one she knows (apart from Evita) can actually see her in this situation now; given Michelle herself is feeling worried that she'll potentially see someone who she might know and this unease (even if there's not even the slightest chance that they should be able to see her like this right now, given how things have been set up) is making her feel incredibly tense! Her mind is in such an active state, worrying about all of the potential reactions she might have to seeing them (mainly dealing with the fact she'll have to eventually come clean about just what has happened to everyone who isn't currently aware of her new role, sooner or later), it just won't let her relax and actually completely accept that such a major change in their status quo is after taking place... Hopefully though, Evita's training sessions should eventually be able to help Michelle finally adjust to accepting these sort of situations more easily (it getting to the point where she's now able to publicly and loudly declare that she is the slave of Evita, like what Trina'd done in the original comics), without needing her fears to be suppressed so often? Look forward to seeing whatever you end up doing next, since you've made a whole lot of cool ideas, ones we all enjoy reading; so don't be so hard on yourself.

DarkJade

Hello, mhmm ... I do not hate this strip. It is good. Realy. - The sheen is beautifull as allways. - The scene is greate - more reasons for rubber, bondage and pleasure are very welcome. - The dialog/story is greate, because it is very classic - but I think most of us would not be able to think/do differently in that situation. My only complain - and only because I allways complain about it - is that Michelle (or any character) is reused. Greetings Juy Juka

Juy Juka

You did **SPECTACULAR** my dear girl.

KF5TQN

Honestly despite the experimentation here it is a step towards bettering your craft. And your self seen problems/mistakes are actually small enough or nonexistent to a point I can't find them. I may not have the talent to draw at all but I can at least tell when it's good or not and better or worse. You are getting better. I'm sure not where you see yourself in final goal but that's the thing. You should always seek better but never be discouraged by your progress. The closer you come to perfection the farther it gets. That's the nature of it. Just like that creepy scientist from bleach your art should never be considered perfect. For where else is there to go with it. It's a dead end. However you should always seek to be better than what you where before. I mean look how far you've come. Your shading, line work, all of it has become uniquely yours and gets better every time. Don't be discouraged because you aren't at that perfect imagined image you have in your mind. Be encouraged that you come closer with every piece you make. Be inspired by the fact that you've grown and will continue to do so. As an artist and a person

Dr4g0n1c0v3rl0rd

This is really good. I enjoyed it.

Raven384

You are far too hard on yourself. You clearly need someone to help you enjoy the moment, and forget about all those loud intrusive thoughts, because they’re not right, this one is something very special.

Pete Spicer

Don't be so hard on yourself, i think it's very nice and shiny!

Cronchysami

Just relax and pace yourself. It sounds like you’re going through a lot, and need a bit of a break. Don’t force yourself to work and make deadlines if it makes you miserable. <3

EldLynch

Oh my, the /shine/ on that suit! I swear you get better with them every time!

Triancia


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