After her first truly unforgettable night, Astra puts everything else on hold ā just to see him again... ā ļø
This is my first attempt at writing story and dialogue.
Iām still figuring out the structure, pacing, and delivery.
Some parts may feel a bit rough or disjointed ā for example, I definitely need to revise and improve the 5th page.
(dialogues in the manga will 100% be changed)
At the moment, the full chapter is planned to be 16 pages total.
Fun fact: I originally considered building the story around a QoS tattoo,
but looking at the long-term workload, I decided it would be too complex for this format ā so I dropped the idea.
š¬ Still, I hope you enjoy this early attempt ā
and Iād really appreciate any feedback you might have.
Thank you so much for your support ā it truly helps me grow and keep creating š