Necroepilogos, armatus - 8.5
Added 2023-10-05 15:11:09 +0000 UTCDon't lie, Ooni. The Commander wants answers. And she sees right through you.
Not much else to say here this chapter except onward we go! This arc has some serious steam left in it yet, I think. Arcs 6 and 7 were 10 chapters each (though I have had some feedback that 7 overstayed its welcome by just a tiny bit), and this arc is less 'fighty', so far. Elpida still needs to rest before she can risk the journey to speak with the pilot, Ooni needs deprogramming(???), and they haven't even got to properly cataloging the inside of Pheiri. Plenty more to come. As always, dear reader, I hope you're enjoying Necroepilogos as much as I am!
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Comments
Perhaps if they had some brains to eat, this wouldn't be so difficult!
Hazel Young
2023-10-05 16:28:25 +0000 UTCInterpersonal relations in the work place can be so troublesome sometimes. You appease one employee, only to end up upsetting another. Why can't we all just get along and eat brains?
Kennyevilmonkey
2023-10-05 16:19:56 +0000 UTCHaha, oh dear, I suppose that is one of the major weaknesses of serial fiction! Very glad you enjoyed the chapter though, thank you so much. Next chapter it looks like the juicy middle is already happening though, hopefully!
Hazel Young
2023-10-05 16:08:15 +0000 UTCSometimes I love it and hate it when these chapters come out. Slow start. Gets juicey in the middle. Its peaking with rising action and consequences and new changes. Then you drop us off at a cliff. Ugh. Until next week then! Great chapter!
Epikos
2023-10-05 15:49:57 +0000 UTC
