20min Early Preview for my next video!
Added 2024-09-17 16:53:10 +0000 UTCPlease feel free to give any kind of feedback - let me know if there's anything you liked, didn't like, any pacing issues, audio problems, things that don't make sense, etc etc etc
Comments
I thought it was great, I really love the pacing and how you blend all your topics together
Dylan Watt
2024-09-30 15:11:34 +0000 UTCNot really much of a writer or anything, but I find your intro so cool, I was expecting a similar intro like your manga rec. videos. Loved how you talked about the climber then transitioned to the main topic of the vid. You’re doing great man, keep it up
Gutalada Sudalada
2024-09-18 04:40:23 +0000 UTCI loved it! Cant wait for the end of the month. Only notes I would give are the audio drop-off of the music at the beginning (2:57) was a little jarring maybe lowering the audio or changing how it transitions, other than that the double spread joke (12:31) could use a little longer wait for emphasis something like (But really who's counting that, [ 1 or 2 seconds of nothing but white noise] I was, [audio kicks back in]) but that's me really nitpicking you've done a great job and i cant wait to see it finished!
Isaac Rasmus
2024-09-18 02:31:28 +0000 UTCThe video is great! The only thing that stood out was the music dipping out in the beginning when introducing the subject of the video. It’s not a big deal but the music is a major strength of your video!! It doesn’t have to be fixed or anything but it’s something that I realized because of the way it vanished. 10/10 otherwise. Fabulous-video
SparaticDraws
2024-09-17 22:07:36 +0000 UTCGreat concept! The pacing and story is pretty strong overall so far. I don't think theres any glaring issues within that which i could point out, but i think you could experiment a bit with the intro which could make it even better. I really like the idea of how it sets up the concept of "making the video" bring tied to "climbing the mountain," since you're starting out a shot on the script. That said, it does feel a bit more static at the start, so you could try making the commentary start a little bit sooner, as in having the commentary say "November 1st 2007" a bit sooner, and maybe including 1 more jump cut into the typing of the script to give it a slight bit more energy. You could also experiment with fading in the sound from the monitor closeup, with the sound from the previous wide shot, to have the pc fan get louder as it zooms it. These are super slight thing, but think it might help with the immersion a little bit sooner into the video before a new general viewer might click off, since I think the video is super smooth sailing from when the music comes in. Dope preview, i remember u mentioning alex ross in a stream but now im sold on him lmao. Can't wait for it to drop :)
WhoovieCOD
2024-09-17 17:55:31 +0000 UTCThanks man! You are a great inspiration
Don’t worry about it
2024-09-17 17:25:01 +0000 UTCI found the scans here: https://readcomiconline.li/Comic/Kingdom-Come-1996/Issue-1?id=44076
Ah Lecks
2024-09-17 17:23:18 +0000 UTCAs soon as a I saw the Alex Ross comic art. I instantly fell in love with this video. Kingdom Come was one of the most heartbreaking and hopeful stories I have ever read. It’s a shame he never got to write a full x-men story. Anyway I have three signed paintings by him. One of the Justice league, avengers and Spider-Man. One day I’ll get a Superman copy 🗿. I genuinely loved your Alex Ross section. The panels your chose were great. If you don’t mind me asking, how did you get such high quality images of those panels
Don’t worry about it
2024-09-17 17:07:13 +0000 UTC
