Army Wives Chapter Nineteen
Added 2021-08-22 15:34:15 +0000 UTCA tale of two sisters.
This is a long one. Almost 8,000 words. I was gonna split it up but I felt cheap doing that. When you do weight gain fiction there's certain scenes that you kinda HAVE to write, because no matter how different the characters and their experiences are, they're going to run into similar issues as the plot progresses. As a writer you can only do your best to make the retreads somewhat unique from their equivalents in your other works.
So this is more story than smut, although I think some of you are really gonna dig the smut that's in there. And while it may not feel like a lot happens, this is a pivotal moment in the series. The last fork in the road. Lots of emotional tension.
And if you find it boring, remember that chapter 20 drops next week. We are rapidly approaching climax. But in order for that to happen, this had to happen.
Comments
I’m hoping she DOES end up like Amanda! That’s probably the best WG story I’ve ever read.
Novasteller
2021-08-25 11:44:54 +0000 UTCReal good story, I love your writing style can't wait for ch 20
Black Zach
2021-08-25 07:18:04 +0000 UTCWhile I do want to see more weight gain , I'm also cautiously optimistic for Sinead to over come her depression and lose the weight. At the very least I hope she doesn't end up like Amanda in both her end and her personality in the end lol. Right now Im still sympathetic for Sinead, but I can definitely see that changing in the next few chapters depending how they play out.
Black Zach
2021-08-25 07:17:25 +0000 UTCYou always know how to make these scenes different for each character / story you’ve written! It always feels new.
Hilal
2021-08-23 00:48:57 +0000 UTCSpot. On.
Candice M
2021-08-22 18:45:31 +0000 UTC
