EARLY UPLOAD: Lauren the Lurker Part XIX
Added 2022-05-19 15:26:37 +0000 UTCGot this one done a few days early to make up for the scheduling mixup over the weekend. Took things out of the apartment for a bit in the beginning to spice things up. It gets dark. But if you've stuck around for this long I don't think that comes as much of a surprise. I hope you like it.
Comments
Pls at least one more chapter. I’d love to see 2 or 3. No reason she can’t hit 1500+. I definitely need more pls! Awesome btw!!
Josh
2022-05-20 01:09:28 +0000 UTCI definitely won’t say no to another chapter, but FWIW, I think this is a great finish. It definitely felt like things were headed the way they did…perfect way to end it IMO.
just work
2022-05-19 22:57:12 +0000 UTCYour vision is what matters, but if you're on the fence about it, I think one final, ultra-dark capstone installment would be wonderful. You could even switch up the format to make it less about plot wrap-up and instead just do a long vignette from the perspective of a darkweb viewer nervously and excitedly accessing the long anticipated holy grail of videos. We could get Mike's narration and Lauren's final on-camera appearance through the final product, as well as chatroom dialogue between the viewer and his fellow horny, almost disbelievingly excited paying customers.
Art Bechstein
2022-05-19 18:13:48 +0000 UTCThank you! I didn't go into this one thinking it was going to be the end. But the more I think about it the more I feel like it kinda makes sense to end it here. There was definitely some finality to the way I concluded it. I'm gonna sleep on it.
Jack Torrance
2022-05-19 16:49:24 +0000 UTCThat was absolutely astounding. My fave story of yours. I could see this as a coy ending - but are you planning for an even XX chapters to finish it off?
Art Bechstein
2022-05-19 16:29:32 +0000 UTC
