Jaded Haze Part III
Added 2023-04-19 16:17:17 +0000 UTCSo, so, so, sorry about the delay folks. Back to our regularly scheduled programming.
Comments
Thank you very much! I can 100% incorporate all of those things. Thanks for reading!
Jack Torrance
2023-04-27 03:26:37 +0000 UTCTerrific chapter! Great writing. Beautifully crafted interplay and dialogue between Hazel and Alexa. I like Alexa – throwing up, but resolutely keeping at it. Can we have some description of Alexa’s body, show her eating and downing the beer too. Some detail on her enthusiasm for being a Fat Lady, why it’s attractive to her. 1800! I can’t wait to see Hazel pursuing the crown – that’ll make a terrific storyline. And now she’s outgrowing her mobility aids and being able to be moved by manual labor. I’m looking forward to what kind of new aids and assistance she’s going to need, and I really want to see her enjoying life and getting some of the things she wants. Thanks for this gem.
Jim Abrams
2023-04-26 20:01:06 +0000 UTC
