Dusk Chapter Twenty Five
Added 2023-09-11 17:47:09 +0000 UTCLarge and in charge.
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I almost missed this update! So glad to see Dawn coming back to a job that was similar to her old one! She still has the dominance and edge despite her extra softness! I’m not holding my breath on this “ending happily” as least when it comes to the traditional happy ending, and I would assume it would be as satisfying as Dr. Gladwell’s. That being said excellent chapter and work as always! I love that Dawn’s spirit had almost been reignited!
Hilal
2023-09-11 20:46:46 +0000 UTCGreat setup for Dawn's new job. Worked at a hospital before, you've captured the nurse vibe pretty authentically. And dropping info that perhaps a couple of the nurses weren't happy with the hiring process that lead to Dawn's first dibs makes me pretty worried for our MC. Nursing employ some of the most two-faced people you could ever meet. Add in the god complex and it gets even worse. Wouldn't shock me to see a disgruntled passover coming for Dawn's job. Surveying her routine, figuring out the chinks in the armor. Perhaps even befriending her. Naturally, her weight would be a flashpoint as well. Great chapter again!
Odog
2023-09-11 19:01:37 +0000 UTC
