Dusk Chapter Twenty Seven
Added 2023-10-09 21:54:26 +0000 UTCI know I said this was the second to last chapter but I really like this as the finale. I think it's best to stop here. As much as I've had mixed feelings about this series I think I stuck the landing. Anxiously awaiting your feedback. Enjoy!
Comments
I'm sorry you weren't satisfied with the ending man. You aren't the only one who found it underwhelming. This story suffered in a variety of ways behind the scenes and while I like the ending I think it's one of my weakest ones overall.
Jack Torrance
2024-02-18 19:20:34 +0000 UTCI wanted more just saying
Michael m ccray
2024-02-18 18:36:59 +0000 UTCIt feels like a natural ending to Dawn’s storyline! I like how she’s still with Trevor! I think this is my second favorite ending to a story of yours with Dr. Gladwell being the first :) Can’t wait to see what you’re doing next!
Hilal
2023-10-11 17:57:22 +0000 UTCYou wrapped it up very nicely with this chapter, some of your best writing I've read, the cliffhanger. But a part of me felt the ending was getting intriguing and could have been tied in with Hard Time.
Odog
2023-10-11 01:58:11 +0000 UTCThank you very much man Im glad I stuck it out I think it definitely caught a second wind toward the end
Jack Torrance
2023-10-10 06:04:58 +0000 UTCI know you mentioned you wasn't all that into this story, but I think it might be one of my favourite things I've ever read. Although I'll definitely miss reading it I'm thankful you kept up with it for as long as you did, and didn't just leave it hanging
Tattei
2023-10-10 05:22:49 +0000 UTC
