Hard Time: A Soft Story Chapter Twenty
Added 2024-06-10 04:49:52 +0000 UTCThis chapter is specifically for my Fenway faithful who have stuck by me and this story waiting for some narrative payoff. This chapter is TIGHT. I often struggle with staying within my word count, especially for climactic scenes such as this. This can sometimes make a chapter feel bloated or meandering or rambly. So I'm pretty proud of this one for being so lean and focused while also satisfying. At least to me, anyway.
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Muchas gracias hermano
Jack Torrance
2024-06-10 22:06:36 +0000 UTCThanks!!
Jack Torrance
2024-06-10 22:06:24 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter. You do so well with action!
Candice M
2024-06-10 21:07:10 +0000 UTCEsperaba muchas cosas pero esto es una historia de origen brutal, además muestras el lado más humano y vulnerable de Marla como remate simplemente hermoso
ezio ruiz garcia
2024-06-10 10:56:08 +0000 UTC
