PREVIEW: ALL THE WAY, book two of WHEN YOU FELL FROM HEAVEN (PDF only)
Added 2025-12-03 03:35:37 +0000 UTC
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I'll have a look at it in the morning but I think that sounds right
Alyson Greaves
2025-12-09 03:45:18 +0000 UTCPg 346, 'and she can probably be excused that.' Missing a 'for', I think. Loving it otherwise
SapphicusFinch
2025-12-09 03:15:29 +0000 UTCThe meeting isn't going to be overshadowed, is the intended reading. I might change "Taylor's" to "the" to avoid the other reading.
Alyson Greaves
2025-12-08 09:20:33 +0000 UTC"At least Taylor’s meeting with Coach tomorrow, about how they’re going to replace Maxine in the squad—they already know from tryouts that there are no other girls who can come even close to filling her shoes—isn’t going to be overshadowed by Maxine’s untimely death at the hands of every guy who ever looked at her ass." -- I'm confused by the part after the 2nd dash: what isn't going to be overshadowed? This could be an error due to deleted/missing words, or maybe I'm reading it wrong...
Kiwa Tyleri
2025-12-08 00:19:35 +0000 UTCI've been sourcing opinions on this from The Council of Americans (americans I know personally) and I think I might leave it in
Alyson Greaves
2025-12-05 04:34:16 +0000 UTCOh good catch! Fixed <3
Alyson Greaves
2025-12-05 04:06:12 +0000 UTC"same but for the year" in the fake ID scene is a potential Britishism, we'd say "except for" instead.
Joy the Inscrutable
2025-12-05 03:04:09 +0000 UTCEdit note: page 28, Taylor got to show to her off Second “to” reads as extraneous Personal note: I have too many things to do already and sucked myself into a reread 😂
Endera
2025-12-03 15:47:56 +0000 UTCI’ve really come to love this cover, it reminds me of the “everything else is confetti” line from The Haunting of Hill House. It’s like, all of the problems that the characters face are all just detritus that can be blown away through the act of loving and caring for each other.
Anonymous
2025-12-03 09:03:57 +0000 UTCI cant wait to own this when it is up for sale. you have created a wonderfully realistic world, that doesn’t shy away from the darkness that we truly face. i hope to keep reading of Maxine’s continuing evolution, into the wonderful young woman she is destined to be. Thank you for the best book i have read in 2025, and thats no small thing i read over 300 books this year, from big names to self published works and this one was my favorite.
The Broken-Melody
2025-12-03 05:45:37 +0000 UTCEeeee!!!! Getting closer and closer to having this on my shelf. Truly what can’t cheerleaders do?
Jennifer May
2025-12-03 04:12:23 +0000 UTC🥳🥳🥳🥳 can't wait for book 2 on my shelf! I've been putting off getting caught up for this month 😤
BeastialMoon
2025-12-03 03:56:32 +0000 UTCby coincidence lol, I haven't done the sweep for that stuff yet. no point until the text is FINAL final :p
Alyson Greaves
2025-12-03 03:49:41 +0000 UTCWill do! (I note the awkward Windows pathname on page 13 is well-behaved in this layout.)
Catherine Cowie
2025-12-03 03:41:21 +0000 UTC
